Wednesday 4 February 2015

My profile written by Faith

Hi welcome to my blog.  My name is Faith and I am 9 years old. I go to Tamaki primary school and my teachers name is Miss Kirsty I am in room 7. The things that I dislike are pink and red, silly boys and tomatoes because.  The things I like are loving people, kids that are friendly.  I love my family, blue skies and the sun shining on my face.   

1 comments:

Anonymous said...

Talofa Lava Faith!

I just came onto your blog and already I can see a lot of blogging from you! Anyway this post...I'm interested in the way you're really honest about what you dislike, like for example, you dislike silly boys (and no offence to actual silly boys), and that's good. At least you're not actually saying their names, right?

Although, with this post being a great one to read, I see information about yourself, but not, if I can say, images? Just images, it would be fine next time, even if it is for the side, just, like, a picture of one of the things you like, perhaps?

But other than that little suggestion, this post is a great way to talk about yourself to the audience! Short and simple! I LIKE it! :D

Willy

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