Hi Faith, I like the way you asked yourself some questions about the article for the black hat. I think a negative would be that he fell down a cliff, which isn't very nice. Also that it would be a bad memory to have of their wedding day. Can you please check if you have summarised what happened well, I think you have missed out an important part of the story.
Hi Faith I really enjoyed reading your work and it's really good that you put the link so we know a lot about the information.Keep up the awesome work.
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Hi Faith, I like the way you asked yourself some questions about the article for the black hat. I think a negative would be that he fell down a cliff, which isn't very nice. Also that it would be a bad memory to have of their wedding day. Can you please check if you have summarised what happened well, I think you have missed out an important part of the story.
Hi Faith I really enjoyed reading your work and it's really good that you put the link so we know a lot about the information.Keep up the awesome work.
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